Stefan Perkins
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In the article “Administration to Seek Balance in Airport Screening” by Scott Shane, talks about how the Obama Administration and the airport screenings are becoming too pushy. T.S.A screens about two million air passengers a day. As you get to the airport and get your baggage checked you must either go threw a body scanner or a pat down procedure. The Screener spots things that people might sneak in the airport while the pat down is more of a private search to make sure you have no weapons or any other medal objectives under your clothes. “On November 1 the article says” that the TSA agency introduced a tougher pat down procedure as well as polls showing that only about 80 percent of the public supports the use of body scanners while only 1 percent did not agree with the scanner instead they rather be pat down.
James Carafano a Security specialist from Heritage Foundation and Bruce Hoffman a expert from Georgetown University says that they want the Obama Administration to change the screening procedures. Obama administration should limit the pat downs and screenings to only certain passages who look suspicious. The article also says they should focus more on new plots and approaches when identifying passengers who are at risk on putting others in danger of there safely when traveling. 
Your summary actually was good but you just needed to explain more and use engaging words because remember you want to pull your reader in and you want your reader to want to read the article. Just check your spelling errors and your sentence errors.
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